Wednesday, August 15, 2007
Aaron Howard
My girlfriend and I were making out on my friend's porch all of a sudden .This huge thing appears in the sky and it gits bigger and bigger .So I dashed in side and said Jacob. this thing is coming straight for your house he replied well stop it!!! I can't stop it it is in the sky. The item looks like a plane but way to low. We sit and wate I
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1. Run-on sentences.
2. You need to spell-check it when you finish.
3. Good word choice ("dashed").
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