Wednesday, August 15, 2007

dillon bukszar

Dakota and I were walking in the woods and saw something bright in the woods and we started running Dakota he said Dillon what do I do I said I don't know he felt something I need to find a knife he said ehy doit I said ok I try he said ok well and hour laiteter he have you fiat one I said no he said mean we nendto here up I said well i no this he said ok so we weat on down there was a tolle house I said there mit be a nife there sure a nutebther wase a nife he said thake you mean I presshe chatetit he said we need

1 comment:

student said...

1. Need to finish.
2. Run-on sentences a problem.
3. Work on spelling.